~ My Way... Poem by Dislocated Heart

~ My Way...

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its how you say it..
the way you said-
'i love you.'

my heart jumps out of my chest..
your name writes itself across my sky.
and the stars are just aline.

everything seems to be perfect when your around.
and when your gone,
my sky goes gray,
your name starts to fade,
and the stars has gone away.
the moonlight seems to be a little bit dimmer.
and the sunlight seems to be hinder.

i guess this is my way of tellin you - i love you too.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
*Trusting You* 18 December 2008

your name writes itself across my sky. and the stars are just aline. great lines. this is a really sweet love poem. I really liked it. it is written well.good job.Becca

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Jessica Rose 07 September 2008

I like this poem. Its very cute! ^-^ Jess xx

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C T Heart 13 August 2008

with the hermits and the crabs, with the star fish and clams, i'll arrange it on the shore and spell your name, i'll whisper the golden words eyes closed while holding my loving heart...that's my way of telling I LOVE YOU...beautiful piece...

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