Some Girl

Rookie - 241 Points (May 05)

My Words - Poem by Some Girl

these two words i say to you
i'm sorry
these two words have much to do
i'm sorry

these two words are all i can say
they help me along my way
the are small but come on strong
they can help to correct my wrong

i look back at what i have done
i can not change what has begun
we came so far in life
we share joy and strife

i have wronged you in a way
but by your side i hope i stay
there is so much to do
i need to show those words to you


Comments about My Words by Some Girl

  • Rookie - 0 Points Hilton Ball (7/20/2011 4:13:00 PM)

    i love this poem you did good :) made me smile and i dont smile alot lol (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 483 Points Adeline Foster (7/2/2011 1:47:00 PM)

    Enjoyed it. Even enjoyed you nick-name. Something I might have chosen. And I do enjoy the way you try to keep the spelling customary. Try my -Sea-shell Shop.
    Adeline (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Julius Bocarro (6/30/2010 8:18:00 AM)

    Wonderful..its so from the heart (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, June 29, 2010

Poem Edited: Monday, July 4, 2011


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