Some Girl

Rookie - 241 Points (May 05)

Forever Last - Poem by Some Girl

on a moonlit night
the wind blows cold
i am thinking of you ~
i have nothing to hold

together we would walk
hand in hand
beneath our feet
lay the golden sand

my thoughts begin to wander
as the wind blows past
still amazed ~ i'm wondering
if this feeling will last

things i should have said
things i left undone
is it fair to want
us together as one

Comments about Forever Last by Some Girl

  • Gold Star - 12,202 Points Khairul Ahsan (8/24/2014 11:55:00 AM)

    A lovely poem with a very nice caption. The lines touch as they are read. Very vivid description of feelings. Well done! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Paul R. Wilson (8/23/2013 5:26:00 PM)

    Very visual. I can picture it as well as feel it ;) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Denise Bekker ~* The Sound *~ (6/29/2010 12:37:00 PM)

    The strong connection of love, has such a strong pull! Lovely poem to read! ; D (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, May 11, 2007

Poem Edited: Friday, February 25, 2011

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