My Words Wont Stay Poem by Nikunj Sharma
My Words Wont Stay
In sands of time yesterday;
I wrote some words;
Now fading away.
Their meanings were deep
But to your heights they couldn't creep;
Can you wish for them?
For them Can u pray?
Make my words always stay...
The rocks I itched with my hand;
Withered away and merged in sand.
The words on them too melted away;
From stone to sand unfortunately;
The traffic goes only one way.
I saw them on sand
And in the water flowing away;
My words cradled on waves heart;
Waved at me and said - hey
I know it was your magic
For if, you didn't pray
My words would have witherd too
Without you, they won't stay...
ur words will always stay in ur heart no matter wht is unless u forge it kept it up 10++
your words will always stay however deep the meaning is -10 anjali
'The traffic only goes one way'? ? ? I don't understand. What is traffic doing in your poem? Maybe I don't understand what you are trying to get across, but traffic is out of place here. Water, sand, stones, and then boom! Traffic. I see and hear cars and trucks, highways and roads. Can you find another word to mean what you want? Or not? You asked me to give you my opinion. :) DC
Is that lacking confidence? ...wish and pray for you....10++
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5/6/2024 3:21:00 PM # 1.0.0.1119
your words are engraved on my memoryl! ! ! well penned! ! ! your words are very imaginative and their effect touch my soul! ! ! 10/10