Mysterious Search Poem by Nikhila Churia

Mysterious Search

Rating: 5.0


She was always sad;
With imploring eyes;
People thought she was mad;
Since she seemed as cold as ice.

In cold nights, she wept;
Her bare legs shivering;
On the ground, she slept;
Listening to angels whispering.

She was found wandering;
Like a lost sheep;
And people kept wondering;
Seeing her always weep.

She was as dark as night;
And always too shy;
But her eyes carried a light;
And people kept asking 'why'? .

She had no friend;
But her solitude;
'Alone shall I tread';
That was her attitude.

Someone called her mean;
'Yeah true', others agreed;
And whenever she was seen;
People spat like an untidy breed.

Days and nights flew;
Seasons dwelled with time;
Still, the sky stayed blue;
And the world sublime.

Now her hair is gray;
And her eyes buried;
Slowly she walks away;
As if she is deeply worried.

She is a lady under veil;
Of sorrow and misery;
Still, why doesn't she reveal? ;
The reason of her revery.

Still, she always waits;
At the entrance of the church;
Along with other saints;
In a mysterious search.

Wednesday, November 30, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: solitude
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 07 April 2017

Loved all these beautiful lines in your poem Listening to angels whispering. But her eyes carried a light; And people kept asking 'why'? She is a lady under veil; Of sorrow and misery; In a mysterious search Such an experience of solitude i too had. I remember how i felt and how i spend days and months on end loving to be alone. I can thus relate to this poem. Thank you very much dear poetess.

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Siddartha Montik 04 December 2016

Love this Poem so much! Simply mysterious to as written without a reference too of the Subject Person! 10++

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Siddartha Montik 04 December 2016

wonder what Set of Stanza do I pick to press my comment on! so beautiful so rhythmic rhymes not losing a speck of meaning and flow.. soo flawless! Thank you for sharing Poet! ! a certain 10+! , for I do not want to deceive myself! Thank you!

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Nikhila Churia 04 December 2016

Thanks a lot Sir. :) It means a great deal to be acknowledged by poets like you.

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