Mystical Protection Poem by Uriah Hamilton

Mystical Protection

Rating: 4.4


It is raining
On the streets
I love best.

Your long hair
Is wet and falling
On slender shoulders

That the gods
Would love to caress.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mary Nagy 17 January 2006

Very romantic.........Great poem Uriah. Sincerely, Mary

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Declan McHenry 17 January 2006

Another excellent little vignette Uriah. Simple yet moving imagery. Sublime work. Keep it up. Please.

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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 17 January 2006

Very sensual...I loved it!

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Naeri Natty Joe 10 November 2020

Nothing but light light light ... You are good

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Ivy Christou 18 January 2006

simple, gentle, beautiful.. fine work Uriah! keep it up! ! HBH

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Charles Chaim Wax 17 January 2006

the joy leaping from every line deep joy not transient heart no longer heavy finally love a wonderful poem

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Joy Vanderhelm 17 January 2006

Though brief, this still speaks volumes.

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Sandra Fowler 17 January 2006

The beauty of this poem rests in its brevity.. It flows like a watercolor through the mind.. Regards, Sandra Fowler

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