Narrow Streets But Join The Roads Poem by nimal dunuhinga

Narrow Streets But Join The Roads

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I was really frustrated about the last night's incident,
Dear brother, your helpless car stopped here to fuel the tank.
I understand you have to drive further.
But your wallet wasn't sound as same as my poor pocket.
The two dollar shinning bill which I gave to you is not enough
And the journey is far and rough.
Let the day comes the Automobiles could run with water.
But the water too expensive nowadays.
We are narrow streets chum!
But some day join the roads.
I wish you good luck Comrade
And let the free polluted air turns into fuel on your pleasant way.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 15 August 2009

The only reason for having money is to be in a position to share it with those without. I can understand your frustration when you were unable to help a soul in need. You have a knack of expanding a single incident and turn it into a lesson about justice and fair play, not to mention the cost of fuel. Wonderful poem. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sandra Fowler 13 August 2009

Excellent use of metaphor. Two lonely souls meet by chance and find they have something in common. A strong message. Very meaningful. Kind regards, Sandra

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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