kerri king (1-26-91 / yuba city)

What do you think this poem is about?

Nature

Nature is beautiful
nature is fun
love it or hate it
nature is something to love
nature is god's gift to us
Nature

Nature we love
wate and feed nature
Nature water's and feed's us
god gave us nature
we cant live with out it
nature makes us

i know nature
Nature is beautiful
Nature is about the earth
nature has flower; s and weed's
weed's or flower's nature is us
NATURE

kerri king
Submitted: Thursday, February 08, 2007
Edited: Tuesday, January 11, 2011

Comments about this poem (Nature by kerri king )

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  • Diah -chan (9/12/2009 2:53:00 PM)

    simple but okay, add some rhythm...it will be more nice :)

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  • Neha Aradhye (6/20/2009 9:20:00 AM)

    i agree with you...nice one! ! !
    ;)

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  • Jinal Patel (4/26/2009 10:04:00 PM)

    It was quite good.Nature is something to Love.You are Right.

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  • Candace Batch (12/2/2008 9:39:00 AM)

    It was okay. This may sound a little harsh but, it sounds like my 5-year-old niece wrote it.

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  • Shwetha S Menon (11/26/2008 8:00:00 AM)

    it is beautiful altough it looks like a chidish poem.
    i liked it.
    keep writing

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  • Malini Kadir (1/12/2008 1:16:00 AM)

    little man you are doing fine I see! Keep it up.......keep writing and let your heart speak....

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  • Puppy Luver (10 yrs.old) (7/16/2007 5:31:00 PM)

    I like this poem about nature. But I think it needs a little work on the rhythem and the way you wrote it; it sounds a little childish. But it's still pretty good.

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  • purple moon (7/5/2007 6:20:00 AM)

    nature is us, we are nature. well done x. if only we could all learn to harmonize with it a bit more.

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  • Osceola Waters (5/19/2007 8:01:00 PM)

    I have found another environmental warrior, mother earth needs people like us, O-Ho Osceola

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  • Janine Stones (5/17/2007 12:56:00 PM)

    i enjoyed your poem & so true, good or bad, love or hate, we need nature to survive.

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