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Nature

Nature is beautiful
nature is fun
love it or hate it
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Comments about this poem (Nature by kerri king )

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  • Diah -chan (9/12/2009 2:53:00 PM)

    simple but okay, add some rhythm...it will be more nice :)

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  • Neha Aradhye (6/20/2009 9:20:00 AM)

    i agree with you...nice one! ! !
    ;)

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  • Jinal Patel (4/26/2009 10:04:00 PM)

    It was quite good.Nature is something to Love.You are Right.

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  • Candace Batch (12/2/2008 9:39:00 AM)

    It was okay. This may sound a little harsh but, it sounds like my 5-year-old niece wrote it.

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  • Shwetha S Menon (11/26/2008 8:00:00 AM)

    it is beautiful altough it looks like a chidish poem.
    i liked it.
    keep writing

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  • Malini Kadir (1/12/2008 1:16:00 AM)

    little man you are doing fine I see! Keep it up.......keep writing and let your heart speak....

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  • Puppy Luver (10 yrs.old) (7/16/2007 5:31:00 PM)

    I like this poem about nature. But I think it needs a little work on the rhythem and the way you wrote it; it sounds a little childish. But it's still pretty good.

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  • purple moon (7/5/2007 6:20:00 AM)

    nature is us, we are nature. well done x. if only we could all learn to harmonize with it a bit more.

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  • Osceola Waters (5/19/2007 8:01:00 PM)

    I have found another environmental warrior, mother earth needs people like us, O-Ho Osceola

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  • Janine Stones (5/17/2007 12:56:00 PM)

    i enjoyed your poem & so true, good or bad, love or hate, we need nature to survive.

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