Need Proper Care Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Need Proper Care

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I was pulled from shirt and pushed aside
As house was clearly disturbed and divided
I was preferred more by mother and appreciated
This had lead to heated discussion and atmosphere was vitiated

As the children are normally naughty
Elders shower love and feel pity
They will offer everything to keep them happy
Children too will remain eager to receive and get ready

I was questioned over the scuffle
In the neighborhood there was brewing trouble
I often used to enter into altercation
And this was the cause for bad relation

People may come at home and complain
This will upset me always and puzzle the brain
What was I actually doing wrong?
And why I was now not favored among

I was good at studies also
But hade different style to adopt and go
As it had remained matter for concern
I decided to change drastically and made 'U' turn

It is difficult to go for a change
At a time when you are in delicate stage
You want unrestricted movement
With kind love and preferably no one to resent

I was thrashed and warned of home confinement
If went ahead with naughtiness
I sensed problem with displeasure
But was helpless to think about it for sure

I think back of all those things happened with me
Though I was not completely restricted from going free
Yet it carried a long impression in my mind about behavior
Elders should have thought of my age which was definitely a minor

Children need proper understanding with care
If they are forbidden to go near by or anywhere
It may have adverse effect on their natural growth
The attention has to be paid at home and out side or both

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 February 2012

LADY JOANNA personal message WOULD YOU PLEASE CHANGE YOUR PROFILE PHOTO* IT IS SO UPSETTING TO SEE SOMEONE SO HURT AND IN SUCH PAIN*

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 February 2012

I agree with the last four lines, the sum and substance of the entire poem, in the better interest of the growing children. Rajaram Ramachandran, Juhu, Mumbai Feb 23,2012

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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