Never Ever Poem by Courtney Shanahan

Never Ever

Rating: 5.0


Never say I love you if it isnt really there
Never talk about feelings if you don't really care
Never hold my hand if you're gonna break my heart
Never say you're gonna if you dont plan to start
Never look into my eyes if all you're gonna do is lie
Never say hello if all you mean is goodbye
If you really mean forever please say you'll try
Never say forever because forever makes me cry.
Never Ever

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aube Joshua 16 June 2010

I think this is one poem that i really loved. Simple yet intense. I wont say kudos, because most probably writing this poem was so much more your feelings, rather than any slightest effort to write a good poem. This is immortal poetry. Am a fan of yours.

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Paul Buttigieg 14 December 2008

I know this is rhyming but it is excellent.............great poets get over rhyming but every now and then they write a masterful rhyme at 13 you have done it very well I encourage you to keep writing...........you are heading into a very good aspect of understanding the value to the reader. well done again for one so young.............I hope your parents are encouraging you in this endeavour.

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