Never Give In Poem by andrew Diaz

Never Give In



You have me crying
falling out of my seat
hoping that one day we'll meet
again
you're forever my friend
and thats the way its gonna be and thats the way its gonna end
even though youre a bit far
youre always my shining star
still calling your cell just to see where you are
ill leave you a voicemail telling you that you have my heart and how
much you need it,
sad part is you'll never recieve it
you left this world pure
holding on to your promises
and im stuck sick without a cure
you left this world with a head full of fears
im left with a face full of tears
ill never do drugs, thats the promise we took oath to,
problem is you'll never get this poem I wrote you,
like ialways told, youll always be fine
you’re that star that never goes out, but will always shine
receiving the text at 11: 57 at night
standing not far from a light
thinking with such great fright
ibet you thought that this isn’t the way id react
but you’re the only one that’ll ever keep my heart intact.
Rest In Paradise Miss America.,
yours truly,
Christopher Andrew Diaz

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Dodd 07 February 2010

Chris keep writing and if you dont like my comments wirte me one telling me so rule of thumb seven words per line rhyme is good but not necessary every line unless that is the way you hear it, but dont have to try to make it go that way. letter theme? Put that in the start also! dont keep it a secret like a punch line La puente? Near Downey?

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