hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 38,007 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Never Makes Me Sad - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

I thought of me
Several times
In present context
While writing poems and text

What makes me to write?
Reason for passion to ignite
To put across readers
And ask them to be my leaders

I find many of them encouraging
Some of them come up with statement of rage
I only smile to know the different ways of thinking
It makes me happy all the more for not sinking

I feel no let down
Each of their observation makes me to think of own
Adjust with the views already aired
Even if they were stared

Young may find it philosophical
Elder may find it little clinical
Women may find it partially presented
I stand with them as fully consented

I love my people
As they are strength for struggle
I miss and feel sometimes bad
But it never makes me sad


Comments about Never Makes Me Sad by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 38,007 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/30/2013 8:26:00 PM)


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    Beautifully Written

    Courtney De Widt10 minutes ago
    That was great. I like how you put your feelings into it. The rhyming in this poem is great, also.
    Comment +1
    Wrote a nice poem abour reviews and how they would be accepted by him. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 38,007 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/30/2013 8:25:00 PM)

    Bharath Vullanki9 minutes ago
    Use of words is good and he makes his point clear.
    Comment +1
    good (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 38,007 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/30/2013 8:25:00 PM)

    Phillis Abel10 minutes ago
    Talks about different styles and the author is glad to be able to write poetry (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 38,007 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/23/2013 10:51:00 PM)

    nice


    Anna Laurencio2 hours ago
    good poem Mehta, you're my first 5 stars tonite, anna here
    Comment +2
    Really nice gesture of warmth and respect (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 38,007 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/23/2013 10:51:00 PM)

    DAVID DANIELS2 hours ago
    Top poem
    Comment +1
    methodical (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 38,007 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/23/2013 10:50:00 PM)

    Kesha Coggins2 hours ago
    I appreciated a lot of the differences within this poem. thank you (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 38,007 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/23/2013 10:49:00 PM)

    Sibusiso Eddie likes this.

    Hasmukh Mehta welcome
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  • Gold Star - 38,007 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/23/2013 8:36:00 PM)

    I thought of me
    Several times (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 23, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, October 24, 2013


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