Never Really Knew Poem by lanesa mantia

Never Really Knew

Rating: 4.5


I got these crazy feeling that I've never had,
and when i think about him, oddly I feel glad.

Why do I feel like this,
why can I only think about his kiss.

Never really knew we'd be more than friends,
I want us to last but it all depends.

He only makes me smile,
and when he leaves im sad for a while.

Never really knew that I would fall for you,
never really knew that you would fall for me too.

We're two halfs that make a whole,
because he completes my half broken soul.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

try to add some more..you're really good at writing, but when you write you must take care that the 80% belongs to what you wana say and 20% must belong to what others feel.. Keep it up..i really like the way you wrote it..but it was lacking something.. Best wishes to you :)

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