New Issue Poem by ONElia AVElar

New Issue

Rating: 3.6


Your feelings are recycled,
Maybe many times used,
an echo repeated anew.
My love too...
We often dream
of freshness of new love,
of pure emotions:
of very first issue.
In moments of wild passion
Mother Nature gives a clue…

Offspring, baby, new issue!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Donall Dempsey 22 May 2008

Fresh and full of love...but hey..that's just you! love Donall Donall

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R H 22 May 2008

A recycling of emotions - old love can spark something brand new... j x

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 23 May 2008

lovely baby poem! , beautiful...........

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James B. Earley 24 May 2008

This wonderful work deftly addresses the complications of life itself.....every act...every move is in some way intricately entwined with the other! An extraordinary composition my friend.

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Alison Cassidy 24 May 2008

What an interesting proposition - recycled feelings. I like it - and the poem inspired by the notion. To me feelings infinitely recyclable. They are expressions of life shimmering inside the heart which are always there - be they fanned by passion or terror, or left to flicker. An interesting poem about advaita (non duality) methinks. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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C. P. Sharma 25 August 2009

Onelia, A lovely message in it. Life is permanently under construction. Love dies! ! ! it revives, new issue! ! ! new relation, new birth! ! ! new hopes, frustration! ! ! reunion, dip and dive! ! ! new depths strive. CP

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Ivan Donn Carswell 20 October 2008

A delicate play on 'issue' with 'birth' renewal implications. But the poem is so much deeper... Issue is an end-point to a process worth thinking about! Subtle... Rgds, Ivan

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Original Unknown Girl 10 July 2008

Onelia there is such a clever and yet simple message therein. You poem reminds me of a poem by a poet called Brian Patten, the poem name is 'It is time to tidy up your life'. Your poem mentions mother nature gives us a clue, sometimes I think it's our soul that gives us a clue also. A very lovely poem with multi-layers. HG: -) xx

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Rema Prasanna 29 June 2008

We often dream of freshness of new love... new offspring.... it is so splendid a thougt a passionate write and I think I should have read this much before.. 10 for this Onelia.. Rgs Rema

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Estrella Baldemosa 15 June 2008

recycled feeling or a second-hand heart :) a very good poem...

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