tomorrow at the dawn, arrives the
new year, while today we stand on
verge of the unknown of its worth.
does the terminally ill get better, do
the poor get richer, save a meal, do
our children pass in flying colors
our sons get a decent job, could we
hope for a decent groom that our
daughters truly deserve? everything
stands as unknown and uncertain! .
year last was not better, rather it was
an year of failure, at best a mixed one,
yet we seek a new year, a new hope.
time always stands for change, from
bad to worse and back to good,
better and best, that reveals a great
truth, change as ultimate truth for all
of us, for fortune travels on a wheel,
even prior to inventing one, and that
leaves us with a hope for change,
oh dear, let us then welcome the
new year for who knows, it might
herald a new change, new hope.
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An again..its my mother and me..enjoying your poems together.... she said 'Sahi Baat hai' thrice! ! over these lines.... time always stands for change, from bad to worse and back to good, better and best, that reveals a great truth, change as ultimate truth for all of us, for fortune travels on a wheel, even prior to inventing one, and that leaves us with a hope for change, oh dear, let us then welcome the new year for who knows, it might herald a new change, new hope SAHI BAAT HAI! ! ! ! I am sure we are reading it tomorrow again just like 'after the deluge'....its going to be a long discussion tomorrow! thanks for posting great poems like these you are truly an inspiration
In the same rotating cycle, each and every new year cames with a different steps, good composition thanks,10+
wonderful abstract poem, deep ideas well embedded, lovely to read.........10+++++++++
We need not interpret the goodness or badness that a new year is going to bring us. Do we interpret the birth of our children as bad omen or misfortunes? Everybody is happy in one way or the other. Life is an admixture. Everybody is afterall living on hope and expectation. May our hopes come true. Your have brought out all these points in your fine poem. Life is only a problem at the level of interpretation for most of us. Otherwise, life is a swift flow of currents.10
Its true but we should not leave hope as well.having hope is the beautiest part of this work..........voted 10++++++
very nice and lovely poem. true everything is uncertail, but we don't want to lose hope. hope is what make us go. thanks for sharing your nice and deep thoughts. i always enjoy your beautiful and thought provoking poems. take care
New Year Siphons-out valor Fairy-tale vendor Lo! Love to pamper In lofty leisure. Thanks Sir …a humane and intro – exterio-perspective poem Ms. Nivedita UK PS 10++
hope is all we need but dont forget that we will get whatever we seed nice1..........
A philosophical and beautifully crafted poem that focuses on what the New Year will bring. 'Time always stands for change, from bad to worse and back to good. Fortune travels on a wheel...' 10 Karin
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Good feeling. Nicely expressed. well thought.