Nice Attempt Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Nice Attempt



Nice attempt

Nothing can be shared
And dared
Except love
That always drives

Whether you be in driver's seat
Or as passenger with belt
You shall always feel
What is fact real?

Who has won?
And gone
To the extent of winning hearts
With simple oratory art

Love shall take you to an extreme end
Where people shall feel it heavenly sent
Mix with people by heart
And always remain as part

What religion has to do?
When you consider no cast or color to go through
An ordeal or pain that stands to puzzle
We need peace in life and not the struggle

Life has lot more to prove
Nice attempt to behave
So no ill will is borne
And life stands not torn

Wednesday, September 21, 2016
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 September 2016

Life has lot more to prove Nice attempt to behave So no ill will is borne And life stands not torn

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 September 2016

welcome Aqdas majeed Unlike · Reply · 1 · 1 min

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Edward Kofi Louis 21 September 2016

Except love. Nice work.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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