Emma Jane Rae

Rookie - 33 Points (1988)

~ Nice Try ~

If i want your opinions or advice,
i'll ask,
your sad and pathetic,
and it makes me laugh,
your jealous coz i got,
what you feel you 'need, '
but i can garentee,
destroying us is something you wont suceed,
see what we share,
is something very strong,
so if you thought you'd split us up,
then im sorry but you thought wrong,
i like his boys,
and they like me 2,
so what we've got,
you don't even come close too,
i may not be perfect,
i may not be a stunner,
but neither are you, why else did he do a runner? ?
maybe if you'd treated him better,
he'd still be yours?
he's have stayed despite all your flawes,
i'm totally different,
i'm no alcy and i don't do drugs,
your just a rotten, nasty, poisinous slug!
so i won't listen to what you say,
not a single thing,
the man is mine,
so it looks like i win,
so go snort some coke,
make yourself really high,
you didn't even cause an argument,
and you wont suceed,
but nice try! ! !

Submitted: Friday, January 08, 2010

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