Emma Jane Rae

Rookie - 66 Points (1988)

A Final Goodbye - Poem by Emma Jane Rae

Do you think,
it's ok to give these commands?
Do you think,
it's acceptable to make,
outrageous demands?
Do you think,
it's ok to make your daughter suffer?
after how you have acted,
you dont deserve to be a mother!
All the sleepless nights,
and the puffy eyes,
why did you,
feel the need to lie?
i thought we were close,
you were my bestfriend!
but this is something,
that not even you can mend!
what about when i want,
your opinion, your advice?
may as well try,
to throw a 7 with one dice.
you destroyed my life,
and i watched it end there,
but you were to selfish,
you just didnt care!
you riped my heart,
into a thousand shreds,
a feeling that makes,
me wish i was dead!
Sometimes i laugh,
and sometimes i cry,
so i guess what im saying mum,
this really is GOODBYE!

Comments about A Final Goodbye by Emma Jane Rae

  • Rookie - 187 Points Rick Adriolo (2/6/2012 5:05:00 PM)

    Hard and powerfull.. here's the message and deal with it! the kind of poem I love.. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Nangula Immanuel (4/4/2009 1:49:00 AM)

    Wow! this is beautiful! the sequence just seems to flow, its real good. forgiving is hard to do, but it can be done! ! ! all the best! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 2 Points Wojja Fink (3/7/2009 3:40:00 PM)

    forgiveness mends all broken hearts
    makes a whole of many parts
    love returns to ease the pain
    and a mother's smile returns again (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 17 Points Milica Franchi De Luri (2/25/2009 4:57:00 PM)

    Hi Emma! Very powerful wards, nicely arranged to describe your fillings.I like it a lot.Maybe your next poem will be about forgiveness. All the best. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, February 25, 2009

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