hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 37,871 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Night Is For Silence - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

I sleep less
Worry can be seen on face
Next day spoils mood
Anxiety is clearly understood

Not even good music appeals
Not even good food tests real
Life seems burden
Many thoughts invade all of sudden

Mind is bogged down
As if train is derailed with wagons
The traffic is disrupted
While schedule for the day is interrupted

I hold the pen and stat to write
There is lot more passion to ignite
Mind stops fresh entry with tiredness
I feel no use to make frantic chase

World is changing fast
It has gained momentum from the start
Many people set themselves with natural art
Others align with process and feel as part

I want good company
That has been offered by many
I love to be near with nature
As I feel helpless and ordinary creature

One must utilize full time at disposal
Give full respect to day and night’s arrival
Day is meant to struggle and achieve
Night is for silence and be strictly believed


Comments about Night Is For Silence by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 37,871 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/18/2013 7:36:00 PM)

    ???? ???? NE.. I hold the pen and stat to write There is lot more passion to ignite Mind stops fresh entry with tiredness I feel no use to make frantic chase (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 37,871 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/18/2013 7:36:00 PM)

    RAJENDRA SHARMA Day is meant to struggle and achieve Night is for silence and be strictly believed (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 37,871 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/18/2013 7:34:00 PM)

    Preeti Sabhar.. I hold the pen and stat to write There is lot more passion to ignite (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 37,871 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/18/2013 7:34:00 PM)

    raj malik very nicly expressed (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 37,871 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/18/2013 7:33:00 PM)

    P() () j@, its so nice sir... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 37,871 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/16/2013 7:46:00 AM)

    good


    kylie levingston8 hours ago
    written from the heart (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 37,871 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/16/2013 7:45:00 AM)

    great poem


    Ofuonyebi 'Dinobi 3 hours ago
    An intelligent write with a special grace
    of a poet full of foresight and creative
    reasons of thoughts....form, structure
    and message well delivered..
    keep writing and sharing more
    I wish to see you among the top poets soon!





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    Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago
    i am honored (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 37,871 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/15/2013 11:54:00 PM)

    Awesome descriptions!


    Philo Francis17 minutes ago
    Night is for silence and poetry and sleepzzzzz! ! Lol!
    Thank you Hasmukh for the joys of your poems!
    Comment +1
    good (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 37,871 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/15/2013 11:54:00 PM)

    BJ Brewer20 minutes ago
    Not completely sure of overall point. Try saying it all in no more than 12 lines
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    Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago
    it is my style.250 words poem. always (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 37,871 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/15/2013 11:30:00 PM)

    good


    kylie levingstonLess than a minute ago
    written from the heart
    Comment +1
    Good poem (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 37,871 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/15/2013 11:29:00 PM)

    Walter JasonLess than a minute ago
    Good poem (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 37,871 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/15/2013 11:18:00 PM)

    I sleep less
    Worry can be seen on face
    Next day spoils mood
    Anxiety is clearly understood (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, October 15, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, October 24, 2013


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