As if a sentinel
your nipple
like a great eye
watches
me awake
as you still sleep
I stare
into its unflinching gaze
your nipple & I
eye to eye
you move
through dreams
and your nipple
takes on a life of its own
seeming to say:
'Just you watch it mate
I'm keeping an eye
on you...
...you lay one hand
on her
& I'll have you! '
I drift
back to sleep
under the biligerent
eye of your nipple
smile as I
find you in my dream
Funny! You always take the strangest route to a love poem that is witty and loving and tender and lingers in the mind. Turning your point of view into this point of view was enough to make a cat laugh. Murphy my cat couldn't stop laughing. Lovely poem if a litttle odd but then you always were a little odd you little sod! love GinaXX
Yep, keeping an eye on you....Sweetie Pie, just knowing that you sleep...and dream there beside...someone?
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This made me laugh so much...only you could have come up with this point of view. Awww...did the big nipple scare you...there...there...it's friendly...very very...friendly! See! love Dee dee