No Poem by Rukesh Yadav

No

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That was brutal NO
If you did not realize your blow
I asked you out
But NO did you shout
Fine what you said
But pained how you said
It was abrupt and abrasive
Rough-cut and repulsive
Sounded like-
'I don't care'
Trivial indeed
But love is such a sulky seed
It can grow into anything bitter and ill
So was I bitter-chilled
And little bit killed.....

Thursday, September 8, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 08 September 2016

So was I bitter-chilled And little bit killed..... / The poem is a true reflection of a jilted lover's mind. Nice one. Thanks.

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Rukesh Yadav 11 September 2016

thanks....! !

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