No Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

No

Rating: 5.0


No to your proposal
Find it with easy dismissal
I say “no” never
Do not try ever

She was in rage
With young age
Her temper was shooting
She was stopped from dating

It is normal craze
In small kids too
You try with refusal
They will roll on floor

Mother was angry
She was hungry too
She was adamant to see boy friend
Mother was saying it to end

Such scuffle could be found
In each home when go round
It has become trend among youngsters
We fail to understand as elders

Some children accede to
Some decline and act rude
It is shocking sometimes
But we need to restrain many times

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 December 2013

yes D V3 hours ago tell it like it is. at first i thought while reading wheres this guy going but wizdom came out. nice Comment +1 A poem of great understanding

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 December 2013

John Staub3 hours ago It is indeed difficult to not intervene but in the end, if we do, it often leads to tragic poems.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 December 2013

interesting Eduardo Gonzales3 hours ago I understand the point your making, I am just unfamiliar with the writing style Comment +1 okay

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 December 2013

Elizabeth Coutee3 hours ago its okay

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 December 2013

No to your proposal Find it with easy dismissal

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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