Lawrence S. Pertillar

Gold Star - 16,793 Points (February/'47 / Connecticut, USA)

No Depth At All - Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

You wanna play head games,
And I ain't gonna 'trip' like that.
Shallow, insecure hide and seek...
In the hopes to attract a playmate,
Willing to compete.

These 'acts' of innocence,
Are cute to say the least.
However,
For someone your age...
This shows your have no depth at all.
Or anything worthy to find OR keep!


Comments about No Depth At All by Lawrence S. Pertillar

  • Gold Star - 16,793 Points Lawrence S. Pertillar (2/23/2007 5:53:00 PM)

    I am often intrigued by those who hide behind pseudonyms
    and make declarations they feel are profound...
    and substantial.
    And for this we all pay a price!

    I thank you for your comments. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie poetry lover (2/23/2007 5:19:00 PM)

    you have no depth at all, yes we know cheers! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, February 23, 2007

Poem Edited: Saturday, January 22, 2011


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