hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 37,871 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

No Early End - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

It brought no early end to anxiety
It was dry spell sans rainy day
The earth was torn apart
The green grass had already departed

All eyes were watching towards sky
Only one question was in mind” why”?
Why no sufficient rainfall this year?
We wanted dazzling and little rain drops to hear

Entire desert area was short of rain fall
As if to swallow animals, birds and all
It was still far to show the rain sign
The rainfall was not to begin

We all thought “it is our sin”
The animals were unnecessarily brought in
They must have water through out the year
“They may starve and become extinct” we feared

The priest, villagers and elderly persons prayed
For early rain and concern was conveyed
It was through hymns and sincere prayers
“There will be rain certainly” said sooth Sayers

It played miracle
The clouds heavily rushed in circle
Down poured from all the direction
It was heavenly bless with timely action

It saved not only whole of the area
But animals, birds with heart felt pleas
All dams were full to their capacity
It was really happy sign and relieved our worries

He is only one creator
But in true sense protector
Great healer and actor
Our true guide and mentor

* True story experienced by our region *


Comments about No Early End by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 37,871 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/18/2013 10:18:00 AM)


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    GREAT FANTASTIC LOVELY

    Mrs Jennie Louise Webster4 minutes ago
    I think this is a fantstic poem lovely to read especially it had made me realize what's happing in God's World that he made.
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  • Gold Star - 37,871 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/18/2013 10:17:00 AM)

    Mrs Jennie Louise Webster4 minutes ago
    I think this is a fantstic poem lovely to read especially it had made me realize what's happing in God's World that he made.
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  • Gold Star - 37,871 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/18/2013 10:16:00 AM)

    Francisco J Vera4 minutes ago
    Rain come and goes but if you believe then mother nature might come to let rain fall.
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    nice (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 37,871 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/18/2013 10:15:00 AM)

    Sumit Datta7 minutes ago
    nice idea (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 37,871 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/18/2013 10:13:00 AM)

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    Hasmukh Mehta welcome
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  • Gold Star - 37,871 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/18/2013 10:06:00 AM)

    It brought no early end to anxiety
    It was dry spell sans rainy day (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, July 18, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, July 19, 2013


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