No Friends Poem by Marium Fatima

No Friends

Rating: 5.0


I don't have any friends
And then it was a blast
I thought I'm dying alone
But then they were all here
I wonder why they are here
I was alone when I was alive
And now when I'm dead
They all come along

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
There was no one to hug me when I was sad, to wipe y tears when I cried and to celebrate when I was happy. My life goes on but then a day came when there was a blast. I was thinking that I was alone when I was alive so I must be dying alone too. But no, I wasn't dying alone there was a large number of peoples coffin besides mine. I am wondering why they are besides me when now I don't need any of them
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rick Elpers 23 February 2013

Marium, hello. You have an amazing command of words! ! Clearly your intellegence comes through. Such heart! ! I love it. Please keep writing. For us and you...

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Marium Fatima 26 November 2012

Thanx aloot.. :) i never thought that my poeries would be lilked by people.. :)

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Jahan Zeb 20 November 2012

That is breath taking. Brilliant. This carry some meaning. Keep it up I was alone when I was alive And now when I'm dead They all come along

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Marium Fatima 09 November 2012

Thank you. :) I'm glad people here are liking my poetry.. :)

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Anita Sehgal 09 November 2012

so very touching and heart rending..

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