(no Name Yet) Poem by Sara Gosa

(no Name Yet)



The world is spinning
tilted backwards
like the morning paper
I'm thrown out the day after
not a promise can bring me
to forget all the lies
all the pain is kept hidden
buried inside
under the hope
that's no longer alive
broken dreams that were left
but now scattered aside
if there's one place to hide
then it's inside my heart
where my fears will keep living
though that's only the start

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
12/15/11
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Saif Ali 15 October 2012

That's good, I am trying to realize by heart. Thanks

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Ronn Michael Salinas 28 September 2012

Hmm the last line could be stronger, less vague... just a suggestion :)

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