No One Is Free Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

No One Is Free

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People are not free all over
They have something to run for shelter
Make it solid reason for future
A survival bid to stand for

I have made one day for rest
To sit on road side and taste
The movement of people around
Some new kind of behavior is to be found

I saw some one in corner
Sitting in position like sinner
Remembering almighty in silence
I feel no pity but delight his presence

I found many on run
It was jogging for fun
“No it keeps us feet” some one remarked
I thought it was correct and not joked

So many activities around in morning
It is all for day’s cheers and not for frowning
All worries are left behind
Never to come in life again for place to find

Yes people are self conscious
They may be falling victim to vicious circle
Yet it is full of problems and troubles
After all life needs an attempt with struggle

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 February 2014

Post rhymes Michael Sportelli9 minutes ago your meter is very similar to how i write. Good thoughts, thanks

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Gajanan Mishra 14 February 2014

very fine sir, life needs an attempt with struggle.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 February 2014

People are not free all over They have something to run for shelter

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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