Not all can write
With novel ideas to ignite
It is poet only
Who shares it rally
It is visionary part
That stays apart
From artificial feeling
And shares it with human being
Even though it is known
And fate is accepted when wind is blown
Either in favor
Or in disfavor
It is not the poems
That concerns
But theme that surrounds
It always sounds
Many hands come around
To share the concern on ground
Poor and rich commonly share
Fight with devil and dare
We all cry in despair
When nothing is fair
We shed tears
And commonly fear
If you can give common language
A feeling fully inscribed on page
That shall be read often
After all we are all human
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Your story lines are more than interesting and poetically creative, however you need to improve your structure so that your linage flows smoothly from top to bottom which will enable your poems to be recognized at their full value. Keep that pen pumping! ~FjR~