Not Even My Soul Stops Loving You Poem by ramya karyampudi

Not Even My Soul Stops Loving You

Rating: 5.0


Home I left to the place where I could find love..that's to
My Heart throb...there he was awaiting me..
Straight I went into his love...which I wished for lives...
Then, there were shouts, marvellous, claiming our attention...
The second, he ran to see leaving me all alone...for ever and ever..
I never knew that moment being my last...on this earth...
He's now here, with beautiful flowers...to dedicate
to me, his Lady Love..he sobs, 'i missed you..'
'missed u coz of the two seconds i left you..'not of any use now...
The sweet breeze makes me shuffle over the trees..
wanna cry like a kid...but I'm nt alive to have tears now....
before could I hear the chirping of the birds, the voice
of my beloved reaches my broken heart...now
He moves away looking back and back at my Tomb...
O God...now in Heaven, I feel it Hell...
Iff the cool explosion had'nt taken place, would I have
been on the laps of my beloved...in a pool of care...
Curse the terrorists..they threw many like me
into complete darkness, seperating us from them we love...
Now i'm at a distance, infinity, impossible for him to reach...
piting myself for I can never again have him...
Only thing I can say now is..'Darling, not even my soul stops loving you....'
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 26 October 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Ramya. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Keerthi Kolluri 18 November 2013

really ironic that their love parted...AWESOME IMAGINATION

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 04 July 2011

Nice poem written with great skill and wisdom. The poem is rich in imagery. Well done. I rate it 10. Please read and rate my poem 'Abortion' on page 4. Warmest regards Akmal

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