Not My Way And Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Not My Way And

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Not my way and
Friday,17th July 2020

I prefer to be defiant
with an ideas variant
put the efforts valiant
and feel from inside, the giant

I stand firm
and confirm
the resolve on my side
to put it instantly and decide

I never budge
but stand on an edge
tobridge the gulf
and take it on the self

it is not my way
to give away
the hard-earned meal
and allow others to steal

if life is not an easy
I shall remain busy
in utilizing each moment
for memorable presentation

life is for us to enjoy
and not remain annoyed
the gospel of life is well conveyed
and give no chance to feel dismayed

Hasmukh Mehta

Not My Way And
Saturday, July 18, 2020
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life is for us to enjoy and not remain annoyed the gospel of life is well conveyed and give no chance to feel dismayed Hasmukh Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal

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Date & Time: 7/19/2020 1: 45: 00 AM Remove this comment Poem: 58792579 - Not My Way And Member: Edward Kofi Louis Comment: Side, aside, slide, decide! To ride along with the truth! ! ! Not to hide your feelings. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Edward Kofi Louis 19 July 2020

Side, aside, slide, decide! To ride along with the truth! ! ! Not to hide your feelings. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Date & Time: 7/18/2020 4: 23: 00 AM Remove this comment Poem: 58792579 - Not My Way And Member: Luis Estable Comment: There are no sweet poetic lines in this poem. All the verses are made of words that lack tenderness. I guess this is due to the diction that treats the argument with hard fingers and wants to convey the meaning without us getting a laugh the the subject being presented.

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Date & Time: 7/18/2020 5: 14: 00 AM Remove this comment Poem: 58792579 - Not My Way And Member: Kumarmani Mahakul Comment: You stand and confirm to resolve and solve and decide. This poem is very brilliantly penned with interesting notion. This poem is interestingly penned.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 July 2020

You stand and confirm to resolve and solve and decide. This poem is very brilliantly penned with interesting notion. This poem is interestingly penned.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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