hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 66,209 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Not Vocal - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

We are back to Stone Age
Nothing can be written on page
Father keeps relation with daughter
Whole world watches it with anger

Mother marries her own son
With whatever she may have the reasons
We are lowering the true image
Can you appreciate it at any stage?

Girl child abuse now has become common
Age factor has disappeared and gone
Neighbors can not be trusted now
Seeds offer different plant even after nicely ploughed

Whole of culture has taken deep dive
Where else we go and strive?
For change in mental outlook
And present it with good look

Night harassment for women has become routine
Even news papers put it in side line
It has remained as sensational news
Who bothers about outrage and impartial views?

Nothing is secured in democratic system
Autocratic rule has many flaws in its stem
Never in history had we faced such deep moral
People have been muted remained not vocal


Comments about Not Vocal by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 66,209 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/7/2013 8:17:00 AM)

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    said lavishly. pleasantly written

    rm shanmugam chettiar, chennai
    Jul 07,2013 (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 66,209 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/6/2013 10:49:00 AM)

    The present happenings which you have rightly indicated really show we are back to Stone Age- So uncivilised - ! Wonderful rhyming poem, as ever, Mehta Sir!


    Chandra Thiagarajan, Chennai
    Jul 06,2013 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 66,209 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/5/2013 4:09:00 AM)

    very strong


    Sydney LevinsonLess than a minute ago
    great work, keep it up
    Comment 0
    ok (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 66,209 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/5/2013 4:09:00 AM)

    Jessie MclaughlinLess than a minute ago
    Different outlook (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 66,209 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/5/2013 4:04:00 AM)

    Rajeshwar Singh and Anwar Dada like this.

    Hasmukh Mehta welcome
    a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 66,209 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/5/2013 4:00:00 AM)

    We are back to Stone Age
    Nothing can be written on page (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, July 5, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, July 5, 2013


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