no war
is wrong
because always
we've had war
and more
shall be done
tomorrow
for no
war is wrong
the strong shall survive
and 'they' only understand
the use of force
and we didn't learn
anything from the past
or inside
ourselves
and we don't have
to set the example
so no war is
wrong
as long as we're learning
ever will we ya think?
yepper, that's right
haha nicely worded! yepper' cool word. hehe never herd it. the poem is short and simple. And in its simplicity lies a strong story. I would like to learn to write like that. I tend to run my poems on. Good job
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A great poem like it. A great write. May i invite you to read my poem called, Indian Brave.