indira babbellapati

Rookie - 71 Points (visakhapatnam, india)

Notes From The Shore - Poem by indira babbellapati

myriad are the colors
of the sea at storm
the fickle lover-sea
kept changing his colors
at each teasing breath of laila
her passion brewing beyond
the defined coast-line
o, the way storm unsettles
the sea is beyond imagination

how the sea roared and
roared in utter helplessness!

21may2010
17.51hrs


Comments about Notes From The Shore by indira babbellapati

  • Silver Star - 3,166 Points Hans Vr (5/24/2010 7:50:00 AM)

    very original to csall the sea helpless in a storm
    Like a victim sayed around.
    Nice thought (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, May 21, 2010

Poem Edited: Sunday, June 13, 2010


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