indira babbellapati

Rookie - 40 Points (visakhapatnam, india)

notes from the shore


myriad are the colors
of the sea at storm
the fickle lover-sea
kept changing his colors
at each teasing breath of laila
her passion brewing beyond
the defined coast-line
o, the way storm unsettles
the sea is beyond imagination

how the sea roared and
roared in utter helplessness!

21may2010
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Submitted: Friday, May 21, 2010
Edited: Sunday, June 13, 2010

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  • Freshman - 2,106 Points Hans Vr (5/24/2010 7:50:00 AM)

    very original to csall the sea helpless in a storm
    Like a victim sayed around.
    Nice thought (Report) Reply

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