indira babbellapati

Rookie - 71 Points (visakhapatnam, india)

Notes From The Shore - Poem by indira babbellapati

myriad are the colors
of the sea at storm
the fickle lover-sea
kept changing his colors
at each teasing breath of laila
her passion brewing beyond
the defined coast-line
o, the way storm unsettles
the sea is beyond imagination

how the sea roared and
roared in utter helplessness!


Comments about Notes From The Shore by indira babbellapati

  • Gold Star - 5,335 Points Hans Vr (5/24/2010 7:50:00 AM)

    very original to csall the sea helpless in a storm
    Like a victim sayed around.
    Nice thought (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, May 21, 2010

Poem Edited: Sunday, June 13, 2010

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