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Notice Me

Where am I going?
Where have I been?
No one takes the time
to understand

Passing through me
Walking by me
No one ever takes a look
To see what they hurt

Their eyes face straight
They keep moving forward
Leaving me in the cold
Watching them go

Don't have much left
Sorry if it’s too much
If someone were to take the time
To notice me

Submitted: Tuesday, January 13, 2009
Edited: Tuesday, February 03, 2009


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  • John Smith (1/18/2009 6:26:00 PM)

    Powerful writing Megan, well done and keep going. X

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  • Janri Gogeshvili (1/13/2009 10:06:00 AM)

    Aspiration to realize itself...
    ”There eyes face straight”
    The interesting...

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  • LOVEFOOL Aka (1/13/2009 9:39:00 AM)

    Good stuff thought provoking thanks

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