Notice Me. Poem by Tayla ( Rain. ) Conde

Notice Me.



In the presence of you, I can not breath.

You give me the feeling of hopefulness.

I'm close to you now, do you feel me?

Do you notice how I care about you?

Can you see it in my eyes?



We are close, yet we are not talking.

You sit next to me, can you tell how my heart starts to race?

Can you tell how I start to tense up?

Do you notice me glancing at you?



When I'm around you, I can not see.

The glow of your face blinds me.

And everything I thought important becomes nothingness.

All that I'm focused on is your chest.

Is rising and falling as fast as mine, I focus on the pace of your breath.



Is your heart beating as loud and as hard as mine?


Do you notice how my body starts to tremble when you get near me?

How I wish to tell you, tell you how I feel.



In the presence of you, I can not feel.

My body goes numb, wishing you would hold it, tightly in your arms.

Never to let go.

The warmth would be like fire, our hearts would be beating as one.

And this emptiness would finally cease to exsist.



We are so perfect for eachother.

Just please notcie me.

And notice how much I care.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Trinity K 07 October 2008

........ ohh! ! ! ! ! love is everything.. and is never dumb...! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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