Obtuse View~ Poem by Theodora (Theo) Onken

Obtuse View~

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Insistent unworthy once confidant
Oh, apathetic descendent of harm
'Tis darkness being splashed upon your canvas
Unexpected brush strokes-are cause for much alarm;
Am i your sacrafical lamb being led to the slaughter?
In your indignant world of blood and gore?
Fainting willows of the grave yard, fear you &
Are swallowed up in the ebon' of your nevermore;
Much like a cancer you paint on and on-
With heavy brush strokes of utter disdain
You are the fraud- and the liar here
Oh, deliverer of compassionless pain;
Destroying what i hold most sacred
An opposite view of what 'tis really true
Ill articulator of driven pure anger and lust
In the shadows-the madman-'tis you;
Reckless and destructive ARE your ways
Coming to steal, destroy and kill
Are you, indeed, the Fallen Angel?
Unearthed to treacherously deliver your ill will?
Oh painter of all that 'tis a lie
Oh, 'covetous' artist of doom
Your apothecary 'tis as recognized today as yesterday
As 'tis the grief in this wailing room;
I am so tired of all of the falsehoods
I am so tired of sll of your chemical lace
Taking in your spiked waterfalls, no more
Instead i paint over your angry-evil face;


By, Theodora Onken

January 3,2013

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Be very careful who you trust or confide in or for that matter befriend. There are people out there who would love to have complete control of you and your entire life. Whether you believe it or not, there are actual groups of people that are bound together by a common cause...They are the manipulators...after anything that you might have. We are in the process now of compiling info...it is a connect the dots sort of quest. After being victimized in 2002 and again in 2007, one might think that we would be disillusioned by the net...but we're not..just going forward but with new determination in our hearts and souls to make sure that no one else is made a victim or is ever, ever stalked. Now you have the new years resolutions. One more point, if you are ever lied about by someone who at one time promised to get you whatever way they could...gather up all that has been said and make an example out of them...the court room is the only place that defamation of character can be righted. God bless the rest of you and am sending wishes for a brighter, happier and non violent year.
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