Occupied Poem by Douglas Scotney

Douglas Scotney

Douglas Scotney

Toowoomba, Queensland, Australia. Resides in Adelaide

Occupied

Rating: 5.0


Not clear from walking under a tree in a bug-proof hat,
or, particularly, in a bubble,
but plain, from doing so and brushing your hair on its leaves,
is that a tree is a house occupied to the tips of its eaves.

Occupied
Wednesday, April 10, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: house,occupying,tree
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
a poem in a sentence
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aniruddha Pathak 10 April 2019

The word 'eaves' used very tantalisingly and beautifully. From context it may mean leaves as well, but not really. Hat can be the roof on top of the walls. The title and the illustration are evocative.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 April 2019

Tree is a house occupied to the tips of its eaves. A tree is house of many birds, insects and leaves. This poem is brilliantly penned with interesting perception.10

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Douglas Scotney

Douglas Scotney

Toowoomba, Queensland, Australia. Resides in Adelaide
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