Raven Bishop

Rookie (March 18 1985 / WI)

Ocean Haiku


I'm swimming but can't.
I'm swimming but sinking.
I'm swimming but can't.

Submitted: Friday, August 08, 2008

Do you like this poem?
0 person liked.
0 person did not like.

Form:


Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?

Comments about this poem (Ocean Haiku by Raven Bishop )

  • Rookie - 8 Points Anjali Sinha (1/12/2009 11:39:00 PM)

    you swim but dont sink please
    we want u here
    lovely haiku
    anjali (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Albert Wong (9/8/2008 9:14:00 PM)

    Ha, you need to learn from the beginning,
    Your mom, dad, or your friend can.
    Don't just scared, go ahead....
    simple short tells all about fear. (Report) Reply

Read all 2 comments »

Famous Poems

  1. Phenomenal Woman
    Maya Angelou
  2. Still I Rise
    Maya Angelou
  3. The Road Not Taken
    Robert Frost
  4. If You Forget Me
    Pablo Neruda
  5. Dreams
    Langston Hughes
  6. Annabel Lee
    Edgar Allan Poe
  7. Caged Bird
    Maya Angelou
  8. If
    Rudyard Kipling
  9. Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening
    Robert Frost
  10. A Dream Within A Dream
    Edgar Allan Poe
Trending Poets
Trending Poems
  1. Daffodils, William Wordsworth
  2. The Road Not Taken, Robert Frost
  3. If You Forget Me, Pablo Neruda
  4. Phenomenal Woman, Maya Angelou
  5. Still I Rise, Maya Angelou
  6. If You Awaken Before Me, Lora Colon
  7. Dreams, Langston Hughes
  8. Do Not Stand At My Grave And Weep, Mary Elizabeth Frye
  9. If, Rudyard Kipling
  10. Annabel Lee, Edgar Allan Poe
[Hata Bildir]