(March 18 1985 / WI)

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Ocean Haiku

I'm swimming but can't.
I'm swimming but sinking.
I'm swimming but can't.

Submitted: Friday, August 08, 2008

Comments about this poem (Ocean Haiku by Raven Bishop )

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  • Anjali Sinha (1/12/2009 11:39:00 PM)

    you swim but dont sink please
    we want u here
    lovely haiku
    anjali

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  • Albert Wong (9/8/2008 9:14:00 PM)

    Ha, you need to learn from the beginning,
    Your mom, dad, or your friend can.
    Don't just scared, go ahead....
    simple short tells all about fear.

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