Ocean's Song Tanka Poem by Chen-ou Liu

Ocean's Song Tanka



"I just need
more space between us..."
at sunset
I barely hear her
above the ocean's song

Saturday, April 21, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: ocean,relationship,sunset
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kostas Lagos 21 April 2018

A great tanka.Well structured, beautifully written!

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