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Ode to A Bad Day.


Tis' one of ze days when you just cannot win,
Tis' be the time to stick yer head in a barrel,
Tis' be the time to wallow in yer sorrows,
Tis be the time to just give up.

Ye lose yer time,
Just finding a word to rhyme,
Ye lose yer stride,
A sorry sod with no pride,
Ye lose yer will to save,
Best be silent as the grave.

Submitted: Thursday, September 27, 2012
Edited: Friday, September 28, 2012

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Just don't laugh..: P Still an amatuer.

Comments about this poem (Ode to A Bad Day. by La Que Escribe Poesia )

  • Rookie - 0 Points $arah Pillai (9/28/2012 2:39:00 AM)

    I read it in my head with a pirate's voice. love it! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 125 Points Romeo Della Valle (9/27/2012 10:21:00 PM)

    Bravo! A few powerful words that clearly shows Beauty and Talent magically blended in this amazing write! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! WELCOME to the Poetry World! God Bless You! Romeo-New York City! (Report) Reply

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