Ode To My Woodsman Poem by Laurena Pamela Willetts

Ode To My Woodsman

Rating: 5.0


Feeling lonely and unloved
I took a friends advice
I surfed the net until I met
A man I could admire

He was the perfect man for me
He filled me with desire
He courted me with every plea
and filled my soul with fire

Every night and every dawn
Waiting for him to appear
didn’t care how long it took
That he mightn’t, made me fear

He was my lover as well as best friend
I was his heroine, he my hero
Just the wrong word uttered one day
not meant to offend caused him to stray

I miss him more than words can say
I hope he reads this through one day
And maybe, maybe, with hindsight
he will realise I did not slight

In my dreams I roam the moor
Looking for my hero
I wont give up, never let go
When I find him my heart will soar

Only then my soul will heal
Only my woodsman can make me feel
My heart burst into fire
He is the object of my dreams
The object of my desire

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naseer Ahmed Nasir 28 December 2008

A passionate writing for the Woodman lost in the forest of misunderstanding. May he realize and understand your words and come back to your life one day!

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Sanya Zahid 29 December 2008

An excellent thought of expressing how you feel.

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Vaibhav Pandey 30 December 2008

very passionate poem. I lovrd it.

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pied piper 31 December 2008

This is a truly heartfelt and beautiful piece. Well penned. Internet relationships can be tricky. As with all relationships, but I think internet relationships are harder. We miss so much without being able too see attitudes and expressions. Body language means a lot, and online it we can all be mistaken easily in our perception of the written word. Well penned. I gave it a 10

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Anthony Edmond John 15 January 2009

The searched depth of a woman's heart.. sweet and salient lines mama..cheers and compliments of the season. The Sage Anthony Edmond John +2348020984990

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Ron Flowers 09 January 2009

A good poem, Laurena. A real pleasure to read Ron

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Vinod Kumar 05 January 2009

There are two methods a human being activities, one is desire the Brain and the other is obey the Heart, This is really come from your pleasent Heart like a crystal clear cascade, Thanks a lot for the poem, Good 2009.

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Jerry Hughes 04 January 2009

Pretty good first attempt Laurena, try it in free verse experimentally. Best, Jerry

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Goran Gustafsson 31 December 2008

Cyberspace flirt is a tricky business

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Laurena Pamela Willetts

Laurena Pamela Willetts

south wales u.k.
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