MIZZ MIDNIGHT FIRE
Poems by MIZZ MIDNIGHT FIRE : 8 / 15
Ode To The Forgotten
Ode to the people who were forgotten
They were once loved and cared for
Ode to their lives
Everyday they hurt
While in desperation for love
and generosity.
Ode to their heart
That was torn apart viciously
With little consideration
Of their inner feelings
Ode to their memories
That bring back happiness
Or to the ones
That are very vague.
Ode to those who have tried
Those who haven't given up
The ones that will keep climbin
For them life hasn't been easy.
MIZZ MIDNIGHT FIRE
Submitted: Saturday, February 21, 2009
Poems by MIZZ MIDNIGHT FIRE : 8 / 15
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I like the way you write!
We fade and be forgotten but hopefully your poem will live on.
I was always taught that an ode was to almost suppose to be praising the thing or object being described; also appose to use metaphore to feel the emotion and relation and more of your opinion of the object. Otherwise, verry nice just not an ode maybe use a different repition.