measure in an accurate radius
the half forgotten pools
spin to get circumference
the swirls and ebb of whispering cool
calculate the unmasked area
where love and friendship sit on its throne
you may glide and sail in parallel
swim and dive in symmetrical pattern
on the circle of love of bees and roses
no point of end, no starting points
just streaming on ring in cycles
we just have to water and tend
6th of December,2009
A very warming piece Catrina done in style and much thought 10 Daniel
water the rose but don't try to 'water' the bee...he loves only honey...rose honey...of his own rose! a rose gets inspired goes poetic...
the keenest observation is the reflection of the poem.10
Oh Eyan i forgot to put a footnote below the poem it was inspired by one of your poem...Thanks for the inspiration you gave me....thanks for the support and all....God Bless! ! !
hahaha I understood this one perfectly! ! A bee and a rose... very nice together in one circle I wonder where the inspiration came from hmmmm... Your poems keep getting better and better Keep shining like the sun C.T
Good comparisons shown in this fine verse Catrina - - the circle of love ever turns -10/10 Fay -
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Completely an interesting piece. Certain lines and title s this write are really catchy. Ending line is executed well.