* Offering Poem by Raven Black

* Offering

Rating: 2.7


aware
in the silk of dreams
each breath...you take
deeper...
by flame returned
by light snuffed out
embraced
humbled in your presence
child chosen
by hands unseen
draped in naked splendor
by robes of night
forever thine
till thine undone
once felt in your flesh

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gerry Zimman 03 September 2009

Your perfect offering.

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Barbara Terry 02 September 2009

This is really deep and so surreal in its wording. Your chosen words really make us think about our offerings. A 10+++++ and thank you for sharing. Love & hugs, Barbara

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