Oh My Splendour Poem by Sathya Narayana

Oh My Splendour

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You bring me back,
oh my young splendor,
the springs I lost
and echo in my ears
the sweet melodies
of cuckoos I heard last!

In my dream garden
new leaves sprout,
exotic hues blossom
on a floral ramp of roses,
jasmines and chrysanthemums.

I see you walking with a beam
clad in a white silk sari
that's flying and fluttering
in air carelessly
with all airs about
caressing your silkier skin.

When you sashay towards me,
like Vana Devatha
like Sakuntala,
on my knees I genuflect with awe;
my eyes eying your secrets,
my lips vying brazenly
with the buzzing honey bees
for your scents heavenly;
my both hands stretched out
and palms full with flowers
I bow to your beauty
and with all my senses stammering
I utter, "Hi Sweetie, here is my tender offering! "

Friday, November 6, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: beauty,eyes,flowers,heaven,lips,rose,scents
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Martyres 18 November 2009

a nice happy romantic write Sathya......thanks 10+++

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Aijaz Asif 15 November 2009

bravo, bravo....very, very beautiful write bhayya I loved it...thanks 10++++ rgds asif

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Romeo Della Valle 13 November 2009

Oh, Sathya, you sound like a true Indian Romeo, full of feelings, like a song I just recently heard, ' You make me feel so young', very romantic, I have been there, so many, many times, my dear...keep it up, my friend, like me, you are singing to the whole world...Love and Peace, Romeo

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Kesav Easwaran 08 November 2009

sweet and romantic Sathya...your words walk beaming in tandem, along with your sweetie there...thanks...10

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Sathya Narayana

Sathya Narayana

Nellore, Andhra Pradesh
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