Oh My Love! ! ! ! Poem by Sathya Narayana

Oh My Love! ! ! !

Rating: 5.0


Layer me on your lips oh dear! I vow
I will be the tang of your daily prayers
Wear me in your blue eyes, oh my love!
I will bear your tears and fears for ever

Emboss me over your bosom oh my dearest
I remain engrossed in the peals of impulses
Your heart spills out, in a swap incessant
Of your love and lovely anger, as lilts melodious

But this is not adequate oh sweetheart
To saturate our ever pining hearts
Let us egress from this earthly smugness
Of skin deep fulfillment, and interlace
Into one whole of eternal coalescence

And let the whole universe around us
Slowly melt down into nothingness

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indira Babbellapati 15 October 2009

when you become I and I you WONDER IF IT WOULD BE BETTER WITHOUT THESE WORDS...

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Sandra Martyres 15 October 2009

when you become I and I you And the whole universe around us Slowly melts down into nothingness A very romantic poem Sathya....lovely write 10

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Vaibhav Pandey 20 October 2009

sathya sir.....very romantic and passionate.....a great pleasure to read this one..10

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Shashendra Amalshan 20 October 2009

Wowww.. How wonderful is to read this poem sir.. Very romantic indeed.. I love reading these kind of poems..Not only does this poem reflect your poetic expertise, but also shows that you are man with a great heart..This seems to have come from the core of your heart.. regards Shan

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Pia Andersson 25 October 2009

'And let the whole universe around us Slowly melt down into nothingness' Excellent! ! excellent! ! lovers are almost insane in their 'togetherness'

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Sandra Martyres 25 October 2009

Enthralling piece Sathya....romantic, original and exudes a sense of continuity...all packed in beautiful stanzas...Undoubtedly a 10++++

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Marieta Maglas 22 October 2009

excellent poem, this kind of eternity is highly and very original suggested............10++++++++++

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Kesav Easwaran 22 October 2009

love devotional...the first stanza lines i most liked...more sentiments sweetness i find there...10

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Miriam Maia Padua 21 October 2009

So sweet...thoughts are so heart-warming Words are breathtakingly romantic flowing with the beauty of your words and an expression of great love and adoration... an assurance of lifetime commitment... romantic and with passion... a little bit sensual... a poems that speaks of a versatile You... thanks for sharing this superb write, Sir 10++++++ Lovelots, Maia

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Sathya Narayana

Sathya Narayana

Nellore, Andhra Pradesh
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