Oh Silver Lamps Sparked As I Await You.... Poem by Harindhar Reddy

Oh Silver Lamps Sparked As I Await You....

Rating: 4.5


Chōka form:
As I await you
Painting streaks of sun breaks as
Day shades into a
Dusk - Sure as shooting! Started
Slowly, shaped swiftly,
Moon beams turned goldenly in
The twilight saga - As I..….


Tanka Form:
As I await you
Came on the infinite dark
Canvas, oh silver
Lamps sparked, Golden lights gladdened
In the endless chains, as I….

Sedōka Form:
As I await you
Darkness cascades on the earth
Shadows frolic eagerly and
Teasing me so my
Longing for you grows fierce
Breathlessly, as I await …….

Friday, June 6, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: romanticism
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Heather Wilkins 26 June 2014

delightfully written. three forms nicely done.

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Harindhar Reddy 19 May 2020

Thank to Heather Burns madam for a delightful review on the poem 🙏🙏👍👍

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Colleen Courtney 09 June 2014

Interesting and greatly enjoyable. Loved that last form and it's beautiful wording.

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Harindhar Reddy 19 May 2020

I enjoyed your review, thank you for such a beautiful comment 🙏👍👍

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Piyush Dey 06 June 2014

it was a delightful read. written in 3 forms, lovely. keep writing. thanks for sharing this one.

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Harindhar Reddy

Harindhar Reddy

Haliya, Hyderabad, India
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