Oh Tonight Poem by Dr subhendu kar

Oh Tonight

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Oh tonight I still adore you by the flairs
day’s sweating has transpired yet
almost desiccated by the thirst of summer
the clock still tickles on the wall
the deep darkness when worn by time
yet it dazzles by the rainbow
to my gleams of love by the full moon

illusion slowly wears the crown
falling tears by the rags of rune
the raves up all earthly doings
when settle in the scaffolds of desire
I do remember you since early hours
waked up by the dew over the green
when besotted hue by the blue heaven born

night still ruffles by the crooning
ripples scarlet across the heart
wine when red by the gloss of the lips
dazing by the waves in oceanic blue
yet betiding by the way side lilac
the grin as the expanse of all green
unexhausted and unfazed in continuum

the rhythms when bestirs by the colors
as when painted by the art of love
yet palettes of dream razzles tonight
breath when cooing innate by the evening

yet it continues by all my dreams
when cuddles in the arm of love
yet unveiled in the vale of tunes
I still remember the mystery of embrace
Oh tonight I still adore you by the dream

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Louie Limosani 06 June 2008

This is a great poem Dr Kar I love the intelligent use of words and the pictures you paint with you're poems. Louie

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Rani Turton 05 May 2008

This is truly an amazing poem. Such lush imagery and rich lines. Thanks for it and continue getting that sublime inspiration!

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Emancipation Planz 05 May 2008

How thoughtful of you Subham... 'I do remember you since early hours waked up by the dew over the green'.... green is such a special colour isn't it when it comes to that flairy pen of yours? ? ? ?

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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