Old Fashioned Spring All Around Me Poem by elysabeth faslund

Old Fashioned Spring All Around Me

Rating: 5.0


Clothes dripping, lined, and pinned.
Afternoon sun sweetening roses...
Almost free of morning's frost...
Morning's price of brown curls.

Hen's flapping to rooster crows...
Fluffed-up hen...chicks in a month.
Robins, blue jays' daylight. Owl nights.
White, full moon. Harvest orange gone.

Big, green locust on the screened porch.
No cicada twilight song, 'Hither, love.'
Doing dishes in a meatloaf-smell kitchen.
Table set. Potato salad. Fresh bread.

Spring is tip-toeing towards me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Duncan Wyllie 09 January 2008

Something very creative and difficult to difine about the this one Elysabeth, like you have captured a series / snap shots of moments passed, also did you notice the curvature of the line endings, unique perhaps by structure All in all, a fine piece Love duncan X

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elysabeth faslund

elysabeth faslund

Thibodaux. Louisiana
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